Spring
For
Lois
P. Jones
I
The
gentle discord of rainfall,
its
alternating static dance are
Reeds
of air in suspension
before
the corona of sensation.
A
droplet splashes and trickles
along
your neck,
its
joyous grief
is
welcomed by you with a shudder.
The
courage of the leaf
passes
beneath the banks of cloud,
the
burnishing lustre blossoms
upon
your limbs,
as the
flowering sounds
of
the sun’s brassy trumpet
illuminates the oracle of hills.
II
The
space between the words
Is
akin to the space between the rain;
This
is syntax –
The
syntax of the rain.
Each
word, each drop,
With
its cohesion of letters
Is
an alphabet written in water
Pooling now in language.
The
liquidity of words.
Your
waters fall like rain,
Their
quiet sudden declensions thunder
With
an astonishment of showers
Light
and gentle as thought’s forgotten tributaries
Bringing with them the relief of the tropics,
The
tropics of the spring.
Easily one of your finest poems. The opening is gold
ReplyDeleteI fully agree about the golden opening.
DeleteThanks Dan!
ReplyDeleteThis is syntax. AND this is music, the breath of in and out, love pulsing and meandering
ReplyDeleteSo the waters flow and fill
Your words beyond all declensions of thunder, risen in the arc of lightening, trilling and spilling into the oracle of hills
Such blessing...your poem
Many thanks Susan
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